In this story there are 5 different heros. Theres one in particular he has OCD and when he goes to his group he sits down and he has nothing to do so he taps his finger or hits his foot on the leg of the sit. His mom has been getting some very threatening notes so she tries ignoring them but they just keep coming and her son is thinking its from one of his group mates and then she gets attacked.
i would change is the ending to tell us who it was
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